“Escape” Flash Fiction Story

A recent entry to a Flash Fiction event hosted on Mikaila Manesh’s blog :D   Reposted here just for the fun of it.  The rules were:

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1. Must be 1,000 words or less.
2. Must incorporate water somehow.

Tell me how I did in the comments below ;)

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My eyes were fixed on Maddie’s coat, hanging by the door. Blue-grey, her favorite color—like the ocean. She’d forgotten it the day she died. She was driving back home to get it, because I couldn’t bring it to her at work, when she got into the accident.

I kept my eyes locked on the coat, because it was easier than looking at the urn on my coffee table.

I didn’t want to think about the urn. For a lot of reasons, but mostly because my divorced parents were on their way over to argue over who got to keep her ashes and belongings.

Listening to them fight was the last thing I wanted to do with my day. I had had enough of that at the funeral, and I was so tired.

When I heard the rumble of a broken-down car pulling up, I peeked out the window. My father, his old car backfiring, had just arrived.

My stomach knotted as I watched him climb out of his car and walk toward our apartment. My apartment. The apartment.

Over and over, one thought kept echoing in my head: I can’t do this.

Without thinking, I darted across the room and snatched up the urn. I had to get out. I had to leave.

As soon as I opened the door, I saw my father making his way down the hall. I slammed the door and locked it, panicking.

My car was just downstairs. If I could get to it…

I grabbed my keys. My coat was in my room. Maddie’s coat—I snatched it off the hook and raced away from the front door just as the knocking started.

The fire escape. That was my only chance. Behind me, the knocking turned to pounding.

I stumbled into Maddie’s bedroom and threw open the window. Looking down made my stomach churn—nine stories doesn’t sound that bad, but it looks awful.

“Jules? Are you in there? Open this door!”

“Okay, Maddie, here we go,” I whispered, tucking her urn under my arm and climbing out onto the fire escape.

When I was about three floors down, I heard a tremendous BANG! I didn’t look up, I just ran faster.

Fifth floor. Fourth floor.

“Juliet! What in the hell are you doing?”

I glanced up to see my father’s angry face glaring down at me.

Hurry. I bolted down the rickety stairs, trying not to panic as I heard him climb onto the fire escape after me. I hadn’t thought this through, but I couldn’t stop now.

Third floor. Second floor.

I reached the ladder, but it was jammed in place. I kicked it a few times.

Above, my father shouted as he made his way toward me. Seventh floor. Sixth.

I remembered reading something about escaping a burning building by hanging from your hands off the second story, then dropping. Would it work? I had to try.

Shaking from adrenaline, I climbed over the rusty railing and awkwardly lowered myself down until I was hanging from the very bottom of the fire escape’s platform. The ground still looked too far away, but I took a deep breath, closed my eyes, and let go.

I hit the ground hard, collapsing in a heap. Nothing felt broken, but I still groaned in pain. Maddie’s urn, now a little dented, rolled away. I staggered to my feet, snatched it up, and turned toward my car.

Only to find myself face-to-face with my mother.

She opened her mouth to speak, but before she could, I turned and ran. She called after me as I tore off down the street. I ran as fast as I could, until my legs shook and my stomach churned.

After a while, I slowed down. I walked for a long time, not really going anywhere. It was cold, but I barely felt it. I just clutched the urn close. It was becoming heavy, weighing on me. But still I walked. I didn’t know where to go, but I couldn’t stop. I could smell Maddie’s perfume on her coat. My eyes were stinging, my heart pounding.

The sound of waves made me pause. The ocean. Had I really gone that far? I glanced back, realizing where I was. It was late, the sun sinking into the mountains behind me.

In my hands, the urn almost seemed to be burning now. Maddie had loved the ocean. She’d talked endlessly of visiting them all—she wanted to swim in every sea, but she never got past this one.

On their own, my feet carried me down the empty beach and to the water’s edge. I kicked my shoes off and kept going, surprised by how little I felt the biting cold as I waded in.

When I was about waist-deep, I stopped, letting the waves push me back, then pull me forward.

I realized I was crying. I probably had been for a while, but I hadn’t noticed.

“You deserve better than them,” I muttered to the urn as I unscrewed the lid. “You deserve better than me.”

The lid came off and slipped from my hands, disappearing into the dark water. I didn’t care, I wouldn’t need it.

I tried to think of something meaningful to say, but nothing came to mind. All I could think of was how miserable I was. How awful things were, and how they were going to get so much worse before they got better, if they ever did.

Still crying, I held the urn out over the sloshing water and slowly poured Maddie’s ashes into the sea.

When that was done, I stood watching as the last remains of my sister dissipated, vanishing into the ocean. I stood there until my shivering became too much to ignore.

Wiping my eyes, I turned and headed back to shore. The cold was finally getting to me. Besides, there was nothing left for me here—Maddie was free, and I had a life to try and piece together.

Whodunit: The Answers to This Week’s Bloody Valentine Flash Fiction Extravaganza!

Drum-roll, please!

 

You have to play the drum-roll or none of this counts.
 

It’s time to reveal the authors of this week’s Bloody Valentine Flash Ficton event!  I had you guys vote, and you told me who you thought wrote each story, and some of the answers really cracked me up!  I had to keep from commenting, because some of the responses were just completely awesome (and flattering sometimes, even if I didn’t deserve it!).

So now, ‘m going to post a link to the story, the first fifty words or so, who got voted in as the author, and who was actually the author!  Exciting, right?  Right!  Okay, so are you ready?  Are you?  ARE YOU SURE?

Okay, then, here we go!

I. “A Valentine’s Surpise”

“Lorena, no,” Markus said.

Though the pressure of impotent rage swelled in Markus’s head, he spoke with a preternatural calm. He had to get control of her before it was too late…before The Order took control for him.

“I can’t handle the secrets anymore,” Lorena said…

For this story, we got votes for Cee, Joan, and myself, but Joan got it right by voting for Nat Russo!

Nat, our spectacular necromancy expert, wrote this thrilling little tale, and I was sure more people would call him out on it, but they didn’t! Which was way more fun :D

So congrats to Joan for getting it right, and lots of congrats to Nat for writing this awesome piece in the first place!

II. “For You, the Third Law”

Baste meat. Intervals of 15 minutes for 3 hours
For desired doneness: Rare.
Tic-tic-tic-tic-ding!
Complete.
Remove from oven. Allow “rest” for fifteen minutes.
China on table. White with red piping.
Fork, 1.5 inches from edge of plate. Steak knife, 1.74 inches.
Imported Italian crystal goblet. Chianti warmed
To exactly room temperature. Complete.
Wait. Wait. Wait…

I was pretty flattered to have myself voted the author of this one by three (four, if we count the sneaky author) people! Unfortunately, I cannot claim credit for this fantastic story (although I wish I could. And honestly, with robots and an obsession for exactness, I can see where it might be attributed to me)–this one was by Joan Reginaldo! And no one guessed it, so good job fooling the crowd, Joan ;D

III. “Fire Lights”

I spit the dirt from mouth and stood slowly as I brushed myself off. I blinked hard as I stared at the beautiful inky midnight sky. How did I get to the woods behind the house? I didn’t remember coming here…

Elise got two votes for this one, with Cee and Joan getting the others. But the true author of this one is Mikaila Manesh! That’s right–sweet little Mikaila is responsible for the awesomeness of a zombie-axe muderer story. Pretty freakin’ awesome, right?

IV. “The Heart of the Matter”

He shivered against the bonds holding him, the taste of the rag in his mouth foul. His head hung loosely to the side; after the hours of torture she’d put him through, he no longer had the strength to hold it up. He barely had the strength to breathe…

For this one, we got votes for Mikaila and Joan, but in fact, it was Elise Valente who wrote this awesome story! Again, I was afraid it would be picked up on, since the pure awesomeness of it just reeked of Elise, but alas, she too managed to fool everyone. So yay!

V. “In Which Peter (tries) a Simple Love”

“I bet you’ve never had a Valentine,” I whisper to myself as I look at her as she sits alone.

Yes, alone she sits, in pink and gauze, her gloves with fingers snipped off, her lips pressed together tightly and I know, yes, I know she’s never had a kiss…

First off, can I just say that I love the title of this? I could learn a thing or two from you guys about naming stories–you’re all way better at it than I am.

Anywho, this is another story in which no one correctly guessed the author: We got votes for me (I’m flattered, seriously!) and Mikaila, but it was none other than Cee Martinez who took us on this fascinating journey :D

VI. “Secret Admirer”

Sarah stood in the early morning light, staring at the package on her doorstep as she puffed nervously on a cigarette. She was supposed to call the police when it arrived, but she couldn’t move. She could barely breathe…

So through the process of elimination, you can probably all figure out that, while this story got votes for Nat, Mikaila, Cee, and Elise, it was actually written by yours truly.  This is the part where I usually say how awesome I thought the story was, but all I can say is: Eh, it was okay, I guess ;)

I’d like to extent a big thank you to Cee Martinez, Joan Reginaldo, Mikaila Manesh, Nat Russo, and Elise Valente for contributing such awesome stories to this flash fiction event, and taking such a last-minute, hair-brained idea and turning it into a really fun, really exciting success :D

Also, I’d like to congratulate Joan for being the only person to correctly guess who wrote any of the stories in this little adventure!  Your prize is that I will write you a short story about anything you’d like me to :D   (I know it’s cheap, but I’m a writer!)

Thanks again, guys.  This was a blast.  I can’t wait to do it again!!  You all rock!! :D

“Secret Admirer” by Elena Jacob – Bloody Valentine Flash Fiction

Written by…me :D

Voting is closed as of 22 February 2013! Thank you all for participating in our Mystery Author Bloody Valentine Flash Fiction event!

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Sarah stood in the early morning light, staring at the package on her doorstep as she puffed nervously on a cigarette.  She was supposed to call the police when it arrived, but she couldn’t move.  She could barely breathe.

In a desperate attempt to avoid this ritual repeating itself, Sarah had moved three times in as many years.  Every time, the packages found her.  Every year, the same routine.

She dropped the cigarette and crushed it, kneeling down to retrieve the box.  It was smaller than usual, but that wasn’t exactly comforting.  At least she’d gotten up before Abigail–she didn’t want her roommate to know anything about this tradition.

Sarah set the box on her coffee table and lit another cigarette.  She was going to open it.  By herself.  It was reckless and stupid and possibly dangerous, but she was going to do it.

The twine seemed to unravel in slow motion as she tugged at one end.  It slipped off the edges of the box and fell in a heap on the table.  Hands still trembling slightly, she slipped her fingers under the paper and slid it off the plain brown box that waited underneath.

The box was smallish, and so innocent looking.  Her breath became shaky as she stared at it, wondering what it could be.
A plain white envelope was taped to the top of the box, “Sarah” written in beautiful script across the front.

She decided she couldn’t deal with any of this yet.  She got up and made her way to the kitchen.  She needed some coffee, maybe some aspirin.  Or some whiskey.

She hadn’t been able to sleep the night before.  Soon, calls would come from her family, asking if she’d gotten another package.  She wasn’t ready to face that, she just wanted a few more moments of peace.

A piercing scream cut through the quiet morning.  Sarah raced out of the kitchen toward the box.

There, looking horrified, stood Abigail, holding the lid of the box.  She was still screaming.

Inside the box was a human heart.  It was clean, and had been removed with surgical precision.
Sarah sank to the floor, shaking and pale.

“What is this!?”

“Why did you open it?”

“I…I just wanted to peek…”

Sarah put her head in her hands and sobbed.  Slowly, her gasping breaths turned into laughter.

“Sarah?”

She continued to laugh, and cry.  “He’s dead…” she whispered, wiping her eyes.  A sick kind of relief washed over her.

“Who is?” Abigail asked.

Sarah choked on the words.  “My fiancé.  Finally.  Finally, he’s free.  I’m free.  Finally.”

Abigail took a step back, then noticed the card on the box.

“Let me see it,” Sarah said.

Shaking, Abigail handed it over.

Sarah pulled the card out of the envelope.  A tacky, heart-shaped card.

Though it’s been fun,

This game is done.

Time for something new;

A surprise from me to you.

Happy Valentine’s Day, Sarah.

Love,

Your Secret Admirer

P.S. See you next year.
 

“In Which Peter (tries) a Simple Love” by Cee Martinez – Bloody Valentine Flash Fiction

Written by Cee Martinez

Voting is closed as of 22 February 2013! Thank you all for participating in our Mystery Author Bloody Valentine Flash Fiction event!

 

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The Lover

“I bet you’ve never had a Valentine,” I whisper to myself as I look at her as she sits alone.

Yes, alone she sits, in pink and gauze, her gloves with fingers snipped off, her lips pressed together tightly and I know, yes, I know she’s never had a kiss.

I sit on the frozen bench and Lucy’s cheek is pressed on my lap. Is she asleep or is she staring at the girl with the pink, gauzy scarf?

Lucy leaves me that evening when I won’t slit blood across her her arm the way I used to.

What use is love if there is no blood, are the words that do not leave her lips but hang in the air as she turns away.

When the door slams shut, I think–well, Lucy wears pink as well–but her pink is in a criss cross network embedded all over her flesh. I’ve given her only one third of the scars she’s given herself.

I’m tired of blood and I want a pink that is soft——-

Lucy sees me with the girl in pink, sometime weeks ahead. She follows us as I take her for coffee, and then I take her next door, buy her a ruby bracelet, and then gnaw on her breasts in an alley. (Lucy watches this as well.)

–What more can you do with her? Lucy sends this text, What more can there be? Come back to me and bleed again. Come back and make me bleed!

Little Lucy (ragdoll in love) The True Love Always

Lucy’s arm on the floor–Arm worn. Arm done. Blood spatter, spray, spill–Tourniquet tight. Lucy smile–claw tooth saw tooth in hand.

“Job well done.” Peter said, “Ragdoll tight.”

Peter sleeps, black sheet over waist, but not on chest, and not on ass. The black creates boy-bisected. Tongue on lip, blood drip, drip, drip, and Little Lucy approaches, claw tooth saw tooth in hand.

Vivisection (valentine’s day) The Girl in Pink

Torn fanny–cold slit to my stomach. My womb is in your pocket filled with your fags. My heart in my hands–not warm as once, blood gone sticky, muscle graying.

I want your voice again, not the canned ghost on a service.

A boy with your name called this morning, not the boy I wanted, but he delivered sweets to my ears. I cried as we spoke. He didn’t know I’m here in bed but I’ve left my nipples between your lips.

Where have you gone?

My heart tells me your heart no longer beats.

“The Heart of the Matter” by Elise Valente – Bloody Valentine Flash Fiction

Written by Elise Valente

Voting is closed as of 22 February 2013! Thank you all for participating in our Mystery Author Bloody Valentine Flash Fiction event!

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He shivered against the bonds holding him, the taste of the rag in his mouth foul. His head hung loosely to the side; after the hours of torture she’d put him through, he no longer had the strength to hold it up. He barely had the strength to breathe.

Lydia paced in front of him, her clothes covered in his blood and madness in her eyes. She was mumbling, talking to herself as she paced, maniacal giggles escaping her every so often as she rambled. She paused and turned to stare at him, and a grin spread across her face.

“You look so much better now,” she giggled. She moved toward him until her face was inches from his own and examined his bloodied and swollen eyes. “Yes,” she nodded. “You look the way a cheater is supposed to look. Covered in the scars of my pain.”

Her eyes glazed over, and she resumed her conversation with herself as she moved away from him, back toward the table that held all the cruel instruments she’d been using on him. Spikes, ice picks, knives, needles—all those, and more, had been applied to him ever since he awoke in this room, tied to this chair, a rotten piece of cloth filling his mouth. And pictures of him on the walls and ceiling, covering every free inch of space in the windowless room.

He’d had no idea how he had gotten there. Worse yet, he had no idea who this woman was. He only knew her name because she’d made him say it over and over as she’d ripped his fingernails out. The few times she’d removed his gag, he’d tried to reason with her, tried bribing her, tried anything to get her to let him go. Nothing had worked.

Another bout of maniacal laughter filled the room, and he flinched. Every other time she’d laughed, it had signaled the beginning of a new round of torture for him. She had more in store for him, it seemed; he only hoped that this time, she killed him.

“And the clock strikes midnight!” she sang as chimes sounded from somewhere in the room. She picked something up and danced toward him, her eyes alight with insanity. His blurred vision only caught a flash of metal a moment before the searing pain of a knife burned through him. “Midnight, midnight!” she sang as she carved into his chest, her crazed voice easily overwhelming the sound of his muffled screams.

His body jerked and spasmed as she cut into him, and his vision darkened as his consciousness threatened to flee. Agonizing minutes passed before she stopped, and the pain was replaced with a chill as he realized he could no longer feel his pulse.

“Happy Valentine’s Day!” Lydia screeched, holding up the raw and bloody heart to his face.

“Fire Lights” by Mikaila Manesh – Bloody Valentine Flash Fiction

Written by Mikaila Manesh

Voting is closed as of 22 February 2013! Thank you all for participating in our Mystery Author Bloody Valentine Flash Fiction event!

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I spit the dirt from mouth and stood slowly as I brushed myself off. I blinked hard as I stared at the beautiful inky midnight sky. How did I get to the woods behind the house? I didn’t remember coming here. I sighed deeply and felt my lungs expand and stretch. Stretching. That sounded like a good idea. I smiled and cracked my neck into place. I stood and felt my whole body crack into place. I felt the corner of my lip twitch into a smile. He would like his surprise.

He should be happy for his surprise. He didn’t really think that I would leave him, did he? My love for him is eternal. The ground felt cool against my feet as I walked towards the warm house. Or would it be home? I felt too cold to call it home.

I grabbed the axe that was leaning against the wooden steps. I wonder why he would have it out. We would only light the fireplace for romantic nights in. I opened the door and heard low noises of pleasure fill the house. Not home. That bastard. I gripped the handle tighter and dragged it as I walked. How could he? I love him. I should be the one feeling the passion. Not feeling nothing.

The thud every time it went up another stair was deep sounding. It was satisfying as I threw open the bedroom door and flicked on the light. “Hello,” I smirked as I watching him cover Eliza. She supposed to be my best friend. Then again she always was a bitch.

“Jun-Juniper?!” He stammered pathetically.

“You didn’t really think that I wouldn’t let you celebrate with out me?” I said flatly in a dead voice.

“You’re supposed to be dead.” He squeaked as he covered Eliza more like he was protecting her. I had seen her goodies before. Too bad they were well used. Not just by her husband only.

I laughed lightly,”So that is why I was in the woods?” I didn’t feel shocked. I always knew something like this would happen, “I never thought you had the guts to do it.” “Pl-Please Juniper. Forgive me! I-I love you.” He said and started to stand. like he actually had a spine and was going to hurt me.

“Happy Valentine’s day.” I smiled and raised the axe.

“For You, the Third Law” by Joan Reginaldo – Bloody Valentine Flash Fiction

Written by Joan Reginaldo

Voting is closed as of 22 February 2013! Thank you all for participating in our Mystery Author Bloody Valentine Flash Fiction event!

 

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Baste meat. Intervals of 15 minutes for 3 hours
For desired doneness: Rare.
Tic-tic-tic-tic-ding!
Complete.
Remove from oven. Allow “rest” for fifteen minutes.
China on table. White with red piping.
Fork, 1.5 inches from edge of plate. Steak knife, 1.74 inches.
Imported Italian crystal goblet. Chianti warmed
To exactly room temperature. Complete.
Wait. Wait. Wait…

“This is perfect,” she says.
Embrace for 5.8 seconds. Disengage.
Present 12 roses in crinkling cellophane wrapper.
She crinkles her nose. “Too much,” she says.
“Valentine’s Day,” I say.
“Of course it is,” she says.
She sits and eats three bites,
Roses warming to exactly room temperature.
Wait. Wait. Wait…

“Love me,” she says.
“Of course I do,” I say. And I do.
Start.
Pull off her scarf
Slowly like in that movie that makes her cry.
Unbutton her blouse while kissing. 2.33 seconds between each button.
Unzip the back zipper of her skirt and
Tug her towards the bedroom.
“Here,” she says. “The table. Make a meal of me.”
She pushes the plate off the table. Goblet follows.
Clatter-crash!
Fork clanks on the wooden planks.

I lay her down gently but her brow furrows
0.3 millimeters deep. Corners of her lips turn down
1.5 millimeters west.
“Not right?” I say.
“Keep going,” she says.
Kiss for 2 minutes, 30 seconds.
“Slap me,” she says.
“I can’t,” I say.
“Choke me,” she says.
“I can’t.”
“Keep going then,” she says.
I slide my fingers into her. 2 degrees warmer than body temperature.
“Slowly?” I say.
“Harder,” she says.
I can’t.

“It’s fine,” she says.
7 minutes 15 seconds.
Complete.

Her pulse is fast but not fast enough,
Breathing rate fast, but not fast enough.
Warning. Warning. Warning.

She will want her bath.
“Stay still,” she whispers, stroking my cheek.
She has never done that before.
“Different?” I say.
“Stay still,” she orders.
Warning. Warning. Warning.
Heat pierces my head and surges through my system.
The room flickers as I grow still.
Her face fades as her smile grows.
She shows me her fingers, black with oil,
Black with my blood, and my hair webbed
Over the knife.

“Such a great cook,” she says. “I would
Have liked to keep you.”
“Keep me,” I say.
She nods. “Economize. I’ll keep
Your tits. And your feet. We wear the same size shoes.”

“Know me?” I say.
She giggles and pulls me to her chest.
The room dims to darkness.
“New you,” she whispers. “A better you. One that
Has realistic red blood, programmed to give
12 levels of pain. Multiple genitalia accessories
And sockets. Sub-Dom matrices.
An upgrade.”

“Replacement?” I say.

“It’s not you, it’s me,” she says.
“I need something you can’t give.”

“Love you,” I say.
Begin Termination Program.
Error: Third Law — Override.
Error: Third Law — Override.
Error: Third Law — Over–

“And that,” she says. “I think I’ll keep that.”

Pause Termination Program. Cancel.
Wait. Wait. Wait…

“A Valentine’s Surprise” by Nat Russo – Bloody Valentine Flash Fiction

Written by Nat Russo

Voting is closed as of 22 February 2013! Thank you all for participating in our Mystery Author Bloody Valentine Flash Fiction event!

 

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“Lorena, no,” Markus said.

Though the pressure of impotent rage swelled in Markus’s head, he spoke with a preternatural calm. He had to get control of her before it was too late…before The Order took control for him.

“I can’t handle the secrets anymore,” Lorena said. Her voice was strained from the way she had screamed at him when it happened. “You’re a bastard and you’ll never change. I’m done.”

“You can’t leave,” Markus said. Her insult eroded his calm, and he spoke his next words through a tight jaw. “You don’t have the willpower to leave me.”

“Watch me!” She said. The remnant of her black ponytail whipped around as she headed for the door of the claustrophobic apartment.

His rage came in waves, crashing against the shore of his consciousness, pushing him closer to the breaking point. The truth was always difficult for them to accept. She wasn’t his first, and if The Order had anything to say about it she wouldn’t be his last. He had to calm himself and get control before it was too late.

She stepped closer to the door, but Markus did nothing. Instead, he waited for her to turn around. She had no choice. They never had a choice.

“I actually let myself hope this year would be different,” she said as she turned. “But every year it’s a different whore, isn’t it?” She curled her lips into a snarl and squinted her eyes. “Screw you, Markus! Valentine’s Day my ass!”

He knew she was getting dangerously close to invoking the wrath of The Order. He had to think of something.

“You don’t understand,” he said. “But you will, soon enough.”

“I have more willpower than you think,” she said.

She opened the door and froze.

Two hooded men blocked her exit. Night stood on the left in dark robes, while Day stood on the right in brilliant ivory. The Order. Not all of them…just the enforcers.

He had failed again and she would pay the price of his incompetence. Instead of Lorena coming to the realization slowly, he would thrust it upon her violently. It would take…a while for her to recover.

“Fool,” said Night, who took a step forward, forcing Lorena to back up. “When will you learn, Markus?”

“I’m sorry, my Lord,” Markus said. It wouldn’t do to make excuses, but he had to say something. “The binding didn’t work.”

“Then try again,” said Day.

Lorena walked backward as they stepped forward.

Markus held out his hand and recited the invocation. The power left him in two pulses and merged with Lorena.

Lorena tripped and fell with a thud. She turned to see what had tripped her and her face contorted in a silent scream.

It was her own body.

“The biggest secret of all, Lorena,” Markus said.

Another pulse left Markus and she became insubstantial. Her spirit and corpse melded together.

“I’m a necromancer,” Markus said. “I killed you weeks ago. Happy Valentine’s Day, dear.”

 

My Bloody Valentine Flash Fiction Event!

So apparently I’m doing a Valentine’s Day flash fiction thing! I poetically should have decided on this before the week of Valentine’s Day, but oh well.

I’ll keep this post short: All you have to do is write a (really) short story that incorporates:

- Romance
- Horror
- Valentine’s Day

And also maybe ghosts. Though that might just be me.

Send your under-500-word stories to me at Jacob.Elena[at]gmail.com by February 14th at midnight (PST) and I’ll post them here! :D

Thanks in advance for the horror!!

So Apparently I Got A Liebster Award. And Then Another One.

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Hey!  Look!  This is a much more productive way to spend the next few hours than all the writing and editing I had planned!

I have been nominated for a Liebster Award TWICE.  This means that I have the lovely L.E. Pate and the glorious J.L. Licea to thank for the twenty-two questions I have to answer below.

But seriously, it’s awesome.  Thanks, guys :D

So Here’s How It Works:

  • I list 11 random facts about myself.
  • I will answer the 11 questions asked of me by the person who nominated me.
  • I will then nominate my 11 picks for the award along with my 11 questions for them to answer when they post a response.
  • If you’re nominated, your name/link will appear at the bottom of this post along with your questions. Follow the same format; paste the award badge to your blog, give us 11 random facts about yourself, answer my 11 questions, and choose your nominees…but you cannot nominate the blog who nominated you.

And so it begins…

Eleven Random Facts About Myself.

1. Eleven is actually one of my nicknames.  I have a lot.  My favorite is “Eve” and you are free to call me that whenever you please—I actually respond to it as well as my real name.  Maybe even better!

2.  I am pretty sure I’m reptilian because anything below about 70 degrees Fahrenheit is jacket weather for me, and you will hear all about how cold it is, and how I’m going to die, and why would it ever need to be so cold anywhere ever?

3.  No one has ever correctly guessed my age.

4.  My first real writing project was when I was a kid and I got my fist tube of M&M Minis.  I got some Peanut M&Ms and regular M&Ms and made little M&M families, and then I wrote an epic tale about how they were aliens that came to earth, which I wrote out in a notebook, complete with illustrations.  It was a very long story for my age.

5.  I LOVE physics, mechanical engineering, chemistry, biology, and astronomy.  I spend gratuitous amounts of time studying these subjects and pondering the idea of actually going and getting ANOTHER degree…or two…or three…

6.  To balance out my overactive left brain, I express my creative side in writing (clearly), music (piano, guitar, singing, and the violin, but I haven’t practiced that in forever so I really shouldn’t count it), and drawing (I would like to do a webcomic someday, but that’s far off in the future).

7.  I own so many books that half of them are actually in storage in my grandparent’s garage until I move to a bigger house.  I ran out of wall space, table space, and floor space upon which to stack my books.  Having so many of my books away from me makes me very sad, but it’s better than having to sell them.

8.  My earlobes don’t match.

9.  Characters I desperately want to cosplay as:  Harley Quinn, Boba Fett, River Tam, The Queen of Hearts, Invader Zim, and a few of my own characters that you haven’t met yet.

10.  I haven’t grown (or really changed much in appearance) since I was 13.  My friends are starting to suspect that I might be a vampire.  Also, I get carded a lot.

11.  I spend way, way, way too much time daydreaming.  I blame my insanely long list of “Stories To Write” on this fact.  One of my greatest fears is that I won’t have the time to write all my stories in my lifetime (a likely dilemma, as I’ve never one run dry of story ideas…).

 

~Eleven Questions from L.E. Pate~

1.  What is your favorite thing to rant about?

Oh, I love to rant.  I’m trying to quit, but it’s kind of fun.  I rant about grammar, the stupidity of my generation, nutrition, politics, and how creepy Google is.  And other stuff, but that’s all I can think of at the moment.

2.  What is your favorite aspect of writing?

Seeing my characters unfold is one of the coolest things about writing to me.  The way they say things and do things that are entirely their own is amazing.  I’ve had characters surprise me by saying things I never expected—sometimes changing the tone of the whole story!—and it’s amazing to experience.

3.  What makes you feel the best that you have ever felt?

Writing.  There is nothing quite like writing a good story, a story you love, a story that is desperate to get out.  If I can have a day where I spend half of it writing and the other half hanging out with the people I love, then I have had a perfect day.

4.  How structured are you with your writing?

I’m actually pretty systematic about it.  This is not to say that I don’t get struck by inspiration or “writing moods”—I totally do—but I don’t wait for those to hit to get my writing done.  Every day, I sit down and work on my stories. And if some kind of stunning inspiration strikes when it’s not writing time…well, then it becomes writing time.

5.  What has been the best book you have read in the last year?

Oh, man, there have been a lot of good ones.  I think one of the most powerful was definitely Between Shades of Gray by Ruta Sepetys (which she signed on my birthday!)—it’s made even more chilling by the fact that it’s based on true events.  Very moving, very beautiful.

6.  What is your favorite genre of books to write? To read?

I love to write YA and MG paranormal, fantasy, and sci-fi.  As for reading, I like about the same, actually, haha.  Although I do have a soft spot for comedic books like Janet Evanovich’s Stephanie Plumb series.

7.  What or who inspires you to write?

The whole world inspires me.  Everything I see, everything I encounter, gives me inspiration.  It can actually be a little overwhelming at times, but it’s also completely amazing.  There isn’t such a thing as an uninspiring person, place, or day—inspiration is everywhere.

8.  How do you picture your writing career developing?

By writing the best stories I can, and of course marketing them in an effective way.  I teeter-totter between independent publishing and traditional publishing, but I know I’ll try both and see where I go.  I write all the time, I read all the time, and I study the business of writing and publishing all the time, and the more I learn, the more action I can take, and the closer I get to my goals :D

9.  Who is your favorite classic author?  Why?

J. D. Salinger is my favourite.  His work is just so raw and real and moving—I get inspired every time I read something by him.

10.  Do you enjoy writing true to life events or creating your own world?

Both, actually.  Sometimes, I like to just examine the events of real life.  But I am a creator of worlds, and I love fantasy/sci-fi/paranormal/all that jazz, so I guess it more depends on which story I’m working on and what moods it invokes.

11.  What is your favorite short story you have ever written?

That’s a tough one—I have a few that I’ve really loved, but I do think that my all-time favourite is “Forget-me-not” about a man who discovers his apartment is haunted by someone named “Sophie.”  I just love how this story came together, especially since when it was requested of me, I was sure I couldn’t write it and that anything I did write would be terrible.

 

~Eleven Questions from J.L. Licea~

1. What do you think about when you hear the word ‘Book’?

I think of libraries, book stores, happiness, comforts, tea (or maybe hot cocoa!), and curling up in a warm blanket to read.

2. In one word, describe a book you love.

Unyielding.

3. What animal do you fear the most?

Badgers.  Apparently, they are insane.

4. Favorite time of the day to read?

ALL THE TIME :D   But truly, whenever I get the chance, I read.  It’s not a scheduled thing, it’s just a thing I do at every available moment.

5. Coffee person? If yes, do you drink it with milk, cream, or just plain? If not, what do you drink instead?

I like my coffee like I like my space anomalies—black, with the ability to distort matter.  (Not really, I don’t much care for coffee, I just love this poster!)

6. Have you published a book? If yes, share the name and a link! Brag! If not, are you working on one that’s on its way to the sea of sharks?

Sadly, I have not published one yet.  However, I will be releasing a new series very, very soon, so stay tuned!  I am in the process of completing the first in a series of eleven books.  For now, the closest thing I have to a book is my Star Wars, Episode I rewrite.  It’s more like a novella, though.

7. Favorite candy and why?

I avoid most candies, but on those rare occasions when I do indulge, I enjoy dark chocolate with almonds.  Mmmm, delicious.  Also, Toblerones.  Those things are epic.

8. Tells us, what inspired you to become a writer/blogger in one or two sentences?

I’ve always like to write, but when I hit middle school, I started writing a lot of songs, and then stories.  When I shared these creations, I found that they seemed to have a huge impact on others, and that was an incredible feeling.  The first time something I wrote made someone cry, I knew I was in it for the long-haul—evoking emotion in another person is an incredible, awe-inspiring feeling.

9. Every beginning has an end. Do you prefer a happy ending or one that just satisfies?

I like brutal ends.  Hopeful, realistic, and satisfying, but leaving enough to the imagination (and leaving enough unsaid and unanswered) with a twinge of pain to make whatever victories were gained more bittersweet.  Happy endings can be sweet and fun, but I don’t lay awake at night thinking about them years after closing the book, that’s for sure.

10. If I pay for you to go anywhere in the world with someone, where would you go and who would you go with?

I would take my Mum to Europe to look at old castles and research for some of our upcoming books :D

11. What is a dream you have and always keep alive?

That I will be the kind of person who isn’t held down by a traditional job.  I want to be my own boss, set my own schedule, and live a location-independent lifestyle.  I’ve tried office jobs—I can’t do it.  I mean, literally.  I literally cannot work a 9-5 job.  I don’t look down on them, I don’t think ill of anyone who does work them or is happy to—it’s awesome that people can and do.  I just…utterly fail in that environment, so freelancing and independent contracting it is!

 

My Nominees

Mark Lidstone

CL Raven

Mikaila Manesh

Merriday Forrester

Cee Martinez

Michael Woods

Jenna

Chere Snow

Christopher Alexander

Megan Joel Peterson

Nat Russo

 

My Questions for My Nominees

1. Do you work on writing projects one at a time, or do you like to be juggling several at once?

2.  Where do you like to write—home, coffee shop, park, library, somewhere else entirely?

3.  Do you prefer to write on your computer, or by hand?  Or some other method?   And why?

4.  What has been something you’ve had to overcome in your life, and did it affect your writing at all?

5.  What do you have to overcome still before you feel you can really succeed?

6.  How long did it take you to start being able to share your stories and hear what others thought of your writing?

7.  Who is your favourite person to share a story with?  Who is the most helpful person to share a story with?

8.  What was the plot of the first story you really sat down and wrote completely?

9.  Where do you want to be with your writing in five years?  And how are you planning to get there?

10.  Who do you emulate as a writer—in style, success, or any other aspect, and why?

11.  Which of your characters (from any story you’ve ever written) has been your favourite so far, and why?  Which has been your least favourite, and also why?

Now go forth, my pretties, and answer questions about stuff!  The internet commands it!